Demon Angel is the second story and first full-length novel in Meljean Brook’s The Guardians series. It is not essential to read the novella which precedes this story, but “Falling for Anthony” does provide a good background to Brook’s world. Alternatively, readers might wish to check out her website. She has an excellent primer for the series to help readers who are not starting with the first story.
Demon Angel is the story of Hugh, a Guardian, and his nemesis Lilith, a demon. The book is officially divided into two parts, but I would say there are three distinct phases of the story. The first part is set in England in 1217. The second is a sequence of scenes which take Hugh and Lilith from the 13th Century up to 1991. The third part is set in 2007, sixteen years after the events in 1991.
The story begins in Essex in 1217. Hugh is a seventeen-year-old knight in the service of Robert D’Aulnoy, the Earl of Essex. Hugh has spent the last two years in Normandy, guarding his lord’s child bride, the Lady Isabel. Following the death of King John, the bitter civil war which wracked England is at an end, and Hugh accompanies Isabel and her party back from Normandy to join her husband at Fordham Castle in Essex. Hugh harbours a tendre for Isabel. Although his feelings are reciprocated, neither of them would dream of acting upon them out of piety to God and loyalty to the earl.
As they near Fordham Castle, they pass a site of ancient ruins. Hugh is dispatched to investigate the ruins and check for any loitering rebels who might seek to attack them. It is here that he first encounters Lilith. She toys with him, tricks him into bargaining with her, and steals the first of what will become many kisses. For his part, Hugh can scarcely believe his eyes when he sees Lilith in demon form. It defies all logic and years of Church teachings. As befits her demonic nature, Lilith is determined to make mischief for Hugh and his beloved Isabel. Her plan is to tempt him into sin so as to cause his death. That way, Lilith can claim his soul for Lucifer.
Lilith’s plans are put to the test by the presence of Michael, leader of the Guardians and the demons’ natural foe. Both demons and Guardians are bound to respect mankind’s free will and can neither openly save nor openly kill them. The best they can do is to persuade them to do good or evil. Lilith’s plans for Hugh backfire, and he ends up being claimed by Michael as a new recruit for the Guardians. This results in his ascension to Caelum, the realm of the Guardians, where he spends the next one hundred years training for his new role. Lilith returns to Hell and punishment for her weakness and failure to claim Hugh’s soul.
When Hugh and Lilith next meet, it is 1389. He is a fully-trained Guardian and she is his enemy. A series of scenes show their encounters through the centuries, how they toy with one another, but somehow never end up killing each other. This sequence ends in Seattle in 1991 where an event leads to Hugh’s Fall to earth and Lilith’s destruction.
The story picks up again in San Francisco in 2007. Due to his Fall, Hugh is no longer a Guardian and has lost his immortality. Regaining his humanity has meant he has physically aged from the frozen-in-time seventeen-year-old and now resembles a man in his early thirties. His humanity has also wrought certain changes in his personality as he can now feel things which he could not as a “pure” Guardian and is no longer capable of only being good.
A change in the balance of power in Hell has resulted in Lilith’s resurrection by Lucifer, although she has been stripped of some of her powers. She’s now working undercover as an FBI agent and one of her cases brings her back into contact with Hugh. With the fight between good and evil imminent, Hugh and Lilith must finally choose their destiny.
I loved this book. The prose is rich in detail, the plot is satisfyingly complex, and the characters are multifaceted. It’s a book to be savoured and I found myself deliberately slowing down my natural reading pace in order not to miss any nuances in the text.
Despite the length of my plot synopsis, I’ve barely touched on the intricacies of the worldbuilding, and the excellent cast of secondary characters. There’s a lot going on in this book and it’s longer than the average urban fantasy novel. Although there were a few scenes which dragged, the story engaged me from the outset and kept me turning the pages right until the very end.
Hugh and Lilith are wonderful characters. I loved their witty repartee and seeing their love grow over the course of the book. For most of the story, Lilith is true to her demonic nature, but often struggles with the part of her which is human and strives to act accordingly. For his part, Hugh starts out as an almost too-good-to-be-true teenager, is practically hardened by his purity as a Guardian, and shows genuine emotion when he regains his humanity.
Meljean Brook’s vision of heaven and hell echoes Dante’s Inferno and, consequently, John Milton’s Paradise Lost. It’s not a stretch to say that her worldbuilding is erudite and makes her readers think. When I finished Demon Angel, I had a few minor quibbles about pacing but given that I can’t stop thinking about it 48 hours later – and it has inspired me to write my longest review to date – I can’t justify giving it anything less than an A-.
Also Reviewed:
“Falling for Anthony” (2005) by Meljean Brook – Book One in The Guardians series

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I need to re-read this one. I’m not the intellectual you are, so I struggled with it a bit. But there were many appealing elements about the story, so I want to go back and take my time with it.
Great review, as always
Stacy, I don’t think it was intellectualism … it was the book and some — at times — obscure writing. In the first two books, especially, I hadn’t quite found that balance of introducing the worldbuilding in a clear, but not-infodumping way. I hinted, I put it in the background, and so on. I can see many places now where I suggested things that maybe I should have just stated straight out. That works for some readers, but some it doesn’t. And after becoming familiar with your tastes over a long time of lurking at your blog, I think you might enjoy Savi and Colin’s book (#2, Demon Moon) but it does suffer from some of the same problems as Demon Angel. I think Demon Night would be the best fit, though, just because I take a more straightforward route (and because of the characters, too.) You could probably start there if you like the elements of the series, but found the first book frustrating.
(Also, yay — I’m glad you liked it, Sarah! But I like to pretend that I don’t read reviews (or comment on them) so I’m not really here saying bad things about my work. I love Demon Angel, I do! I just wish I didn’t have hindsight
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Talk about thousands of years of lust!! I would have been dying if I were Hugh or Lilith.
But the pay off was hot closet door sex. heh.
And dare I admit reading this book felt naughty because growing up in a strict Catholic family, to think of angels and demons this way was a new experience for me. And isn’t it great when such a book makes you want to read other types of literature such as Milton or Dante?
im so glad you wrote such a long review…it had so much helpful information! ive been hearing great things about Ms. Brook all over the interwebz but haven’t read her books yet and this post is super helpful in getting me prepared and excited to start them soon!
And another one who makes me want to start reading this series
I love it when I can sink my teeth in to a novel. Can I opt for a 32 hour day?? That way I have some more reading time left LOL
@Stacy ~ I read Dante years ago at uni as part of a course called ‘Medieval Mysticism & Religious Symbolism’ given by a very dull professor. It was one of the few original texts which I enjoyed. (I’m still recovering from the tedium of Mechthild of Magedeburg and her Flowing Light of the Godhead. Just take me out and shoot me.)
@Meljean Hey, Meljean! I’m forcing myself to wait to start Demon Moon, at least until the weekend. Which is tomorrow!
@katiebabs I have to admit I was not sold on the angels and demons idea from the blurb. I probably wouldn’t have picked it up had it not been for your Demon Forged review. I’m so glad I did!
@Lusty Reader This review is actually the edited version! It was so hard to give a short, spoiler-free synopsis of this book because of its length and scope. At 423 pages of small print, it’s longer than the average Urban Fantasy/Paranormal Romance published these days.
@Leontine I need a 32-hour day. Or the ability to function on 2 hours of sleep! I think you might enjoy this book. In a way, it’s almost better to come late to a series as there are several books already published. For someone who is into instant gratification, it’s ideal.
Aw really?
I remember picking up Demon Angel at Borders and was pretty much “meh” but then something was telling me (perhaps a higher power?)to read the first chapter. The rest is history.
Just wait till you read Colin and Savi’s story!! So, so good. Colin is a slick, sexy SOB as I call him.
I also can’t wait to see what you think of Dare’s Persuasion and Carriger’s Soulless. Those two books were absolute winners for me.
@katiebabs I already love Colin. Savi is still an unknown entity as we pretty much see her from Hugh’s POV in Demon Angel and he regards her as a little sister.
I just finished Soulless. I liked it. Not as much as you did, but I thought it was an entertaining story. I absolutely adored Maccon and Alexia. Such wonderful characters! I was less sold on the suspense plot, but this seems to be a frequent refrain of mine when stories have a suspense element but are not actually suspense books. I still need to write up my review but I should post it at the weekend or on Monday.
A Lady of Persuasion is next on my list!
Still thinking about a book 48 hours later is a good recommendation. I felt that way about Dennis Lehane’s “The Given Day”. I couldn’t put it down when I was reading it and it has stayed in my head long after I finished it. I offer it to your blog readers as “one of those books”…
I am an “instant gratification” kinda girl
I think it has to do with my impatient attitude sometimes…with certain authors.